I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka rawe, great work sharing your report about Vietnam Marsh! I've never had Vietnamese food - what is the best dish? Next time I would like you to carefully proofread your whole report for capital letters and full stops (you did well at the start!).
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Ka rawe, great work sharing your report about Vietnam Marsh! I've never had Vietnamese food - what is the best dish? Next time I would like you to carefully proofread your whole report for capital letters and full stops (you did well at the start!).
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